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a work in process that needs criticism!

thats a good point, i think most of the things i write end up without a point lol i just don't know how to really get it across... what i was going for was the idea of humans trying to understand the…

Replied Nov 27

Let's share some humor

from south park: what do you call a straight man who kinda likes Harlies and might consider buying one in the future? Bikecurious. i shat myself when i heard this

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a work in process that needs criticism!

thanks! that's actually better

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Nine Inch Nails. they remind me of when my childhood lol Deftones Children of Bodom Lamb of God Mushroomhead Arch Enemy

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thats a good point, i think most of the things i write end up without a point lol i just don't know how to really get it across... what i was going for was the idea of humans trying to understand their world through the cosmos. so i used the trees.…
November 27
Grasp the sky you treeys because we can not lost in a place that time forgot I was a slave or the soul survivor of the radio wars dimonds in the sky she was sick with glamour I was nothing more than a male whore his cock was hard and I knew he crave…
November 26
from south park: what do you call a straight man who kinda likes Harlies and might consider buying one in the future? Bikecurious. i shat myself when i heard this
November 11
Maya and Grace Colelay are now friends
November 10
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Wr1tt3n V3ng3anc3 and Maya are now friends
November 10
November 10
thanks! that's actually better
November 9
I think using punctuation would be a great help. Like this: Tree arms spread elegantly over my eyes, over sky, over cloud, over nice, fresh oxygen. An emotional wreck that screams and coddles lives inside, down by the door with springs in the back.…
November 9
Nine Inch Nails. they remind me of when my childhood lol Deftones Children of Bodom Lamb of God Mushroomhead Arch Enemy
November 8
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Tree arms spread elegantly over my eyes over sky over cloud over nice fresh oxygen an emotional wreck that screams and coddles lives inside down by the door with springs in the back Grasp the sky you trees because we cannot
November 8
is it platoian? it seems kinda like the allegory of the cave but its cool i love the idea and the ending if you'd really like me to be honest, i'd say get rid of some of the cliches (not meaning to be offensive, everyone uses cliches, but your poem…
November 8
very nice, my fave is the first one its sooo creepy! (in the best way of course lol)
November 8
very interspective...really gives us a glimpse inside ur head...and so true...love it!
November 4

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I FUCKING LOVE OTEP she's my idol, my inspiration, and she reminds me of why we keep fighting.

i also love lots of other music. and books, and movies, and etc.

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At 9:18am on November 10, 2009, Wr1tt3n V3ng3anc3 said…
How is it now?

Anger explodes
Bloodletting control

The Damage is always
an unveiling of my strength

Enduring though half-dead
Returning from battles with
eyes inhuman and scarlet

Tearing off pages of my soul
Composing psalms of condemnation
Submitting to no one's hold

Pain is nourishment
to a punctured heart

You approach me in calm

You are different from the rest
You thirst not for blood...but for Honor

You desire to be honored and trusted
You actually present yourself as a friend

A Beauty True In Heart
At 9:10am on November 10, 2009, Wr1tt3n V3ng3anc3 said…
I appreciate the invite, and the criticism! I'll try to rework the poem.
At 6:09am on November 10, 2009, Wr1tt3n V3ng3anc3 said…
You're Right it can do without cliches! I appreciate the criticism.
 
 

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